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more than i bargained for (Free verse) by Limness

finite bright finish pound drown diminish sound out deliberately sow slow compassionately but where is the emotion? bought blight done fought fight won are we having fun? forged, gorged, and roar armchair, blanket, snore sundays i'm ignored unless i block the score what am i, your whore?

INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/7:12 PM
Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.




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