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Shwe Nat (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower
"They" say the quiet ones are silently plotting. In this case it's true. Contemplatingly mute. And ever so often, out of nowhere smiles evily. Then quickly scribbles and stashes the paper. You wish to catch a glimpse, but are afraid of what you would see. This person has a reserved face. If you quickly glance from the side You will catch a flash of golden eyes blending with flaming scales. This person is unique. When smiling thier eyes gleam with the evil thoughts carefully schemed but never pursued. Just-in-case ploys. This person is special. Truly evil. In every since. The Golden Dragon. Beware of the tranquil one. The most placid of surfaces hide the most potent currents. Still waters run deep. Be wary of the Golden Dragon. Shwe Nat.

Up the ladder: regret.
Down the ladder: Exhaustion

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6040
Posted: November 9, 2002 1:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2002 1:35 PM PST
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.107 | 10-Nov-02/6:24 PM | Reply
Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Nov-02/7:00 PM | Reply
fucking hilarious. ha!ha! 10.
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