Re: Torn... by loneshadow29	13-Sep-02/12:25 PM
dark indeed. But i do like it 10/10 =)
Re: Torn... by loneshadow29	13-Sep-02/12:25 PM
dark indeed. But i do like it 10/10 =)
Re: Despair by marjan	13-Sep-02/9:13 AM
I can't say i understand the poem to the fullest linght, but yet I like it, except for the hole it's all on one line, LoL. 7/10 =)
Re: the art of dreaming (screaming) by brazen	13-Sep-02/9:07 AM
I agree with the changes that have been sujested to you, shoule should edit it a lttle, and see what you come up with 5/10 =)
Re: Violated by Ojiboch	13-Sep-02/9:05 AM
I like the 'lyric' you got here, nice flow, pretty well balanced, 6/10 =)
Re: Oh Well II by RWAndersen	13-Sep-02/9:03 AM
I like this poem. There are things i would change, but no one, or no poem is ever perfect. I'll give you a solid 8/10 =)
Re: Oh Well by RWAndersen	13-Sep-02/8:59 AM
there's some spelling boo-boo's, but hell there alot in mine too! Bue over all, I love this poem! so i give you a 1/10! My true vote wil be a 8/10!!
Re: After Halloween by Limness	13-Sep-02/8:57 AM
hm...interesting poem indeed. There's some things I myself would change but over all... i'll rate a 7/10 =)
Re: Dream Walker by Tekara	13-Sep-02/8:55 AM
the meaning I love, the poem on the other is hand, is nice, but not quit...flowing? But over all i'll give you a 7/10 =)
Re: Curse by OneFingerAnswer	13-Sep-02/8:54 AM
=) I like it, not complicated, but yet it's still a wonderfull poem, cootos!! 9/10 =)
Re: fairy tale by jlanza	13-Sep-02/8:39 AM
It could use a little work, the idea is nice, but the structer could use some work. 7/10 =)
Re: Come Back to Me by jlanza	13-Sep-02/8:38 AM
!! love it, it's cute, but not complicated, there's some parts I would fix, but besides that I love it! 9/10!! =)
Re: Oh Well III by RWAndersen	13-Sep-02/8:36 AM
I like the flow, but like the last line, maybe change it a little. But the rest, basically, I liked =) 9/10
Re: Satisfaction by Ojiboch	13-Sep-02/8:33 AM
over all it pretty good, try to add more detail =)
Re: she wonders, by <~>	13-Sep-02/8:29 AM
Um...WTF!! spoon her. yeah..okay
Re: None by poemreader	13-Sep-02/6:44 AM
=)
Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil	13-Sep-02/6:38 AM
=)
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-Sep-02/9:14 AM
ich denken er hat ein zeigen dort, du wissen" you proclaim you know German, so tell me what does that mean?
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-Sep-02/8:34 AM
Hmm...don't you hate it when someone goes on and on about something so friverless? And it's just constant chitter chatter? Nothing really that important, it really doesn't say anything, I really hate those, So that means, I love this one! Bravo Mr. Angel, Bravo. But you like mestioned someone being gay like ever ine, LoL. What's up with that? LoL. JK =) 9/10!
Re: A Dream Awakened by impaired	12-Sep-02/5:21 AM
Beautiful!! I love it! One of the nicer ones i've read. 9/10