| Re: Loose Leaf by Miggy |
19-Sep-07/11:14 PM |
hey miggy, I bet you don't remember me but you gave me a little help with one of my poems a very long time ago, lol :) Glad to see your still writing! =) Anyways, I love the feeling your trying to express here, but when writing a lyric try making a little beat in your mind and singing it. This way you can make sure everything flows together and your not going to run out of breath trying to get everything in. But over-all I enjoyed your imagery.
-Katie
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| Re: i need a title by That One |
23-Aug-05/11:56 AM |
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Aren't Sonnets suppose to have 10 syllables in each line?!
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| Re: a comment on Have You Ever Been In Love? by Katie |
5-Jun-03/5:53 PM |
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Thanks for the comment Brandon, and I have your e-maiol typed up, I just gotta get the chance to send it, work is really hecktic yah know? BUt thanks for the friendship poem, I loved it!! and on the other note, you guys know my complanning about him, and everything, is just making him do it more? that's what he wants, just ignore him and he'll go away. =P *muahs*
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| Re: ~For Katie on her Birthday by Misha Sanz |
30-May-03/1:34 PM |
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Aww!! Isn't Misha such a sweetie *kisses* Thanks Hunniz
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| Re: a comment on Which Ever Way The Wind Blows by Katie |
5-Apr-03/11:37 AM |
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Aww, thankz ranger =) that means a lot coming from a guy where most of his work is 6's. Florida is pretty good, nice n hot! I'm loving the beaches! And spring break is coming up soon so yeahZ!!!! No more school! Any more questions, or just wanna talk my e-mail is sassyangel989@yahoo.com, TTYLz, and thankz agian!
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| Re: Morman On A Bike by Blindproject217 |
3-Apr-03/8:39 AM |
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*giggles* Interesting. Yet I like the flow of it, and all, So I give it a -10- ;) Granted I dunno what a mormon is but yeah... :-\ blonde moment! lol, just messing :P Good Poem Blind =)
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| Re: a comment on Lossing Grip by Katie2 |
3-Apr-03/8:35 AM |
Thankz for the tip blind, it's nice to see that there are a couple of people still around here that actuall give advice. =) And some of my friends also write poems, and such, so I will ask them, thanks agian, I really didn't even think about showing them, I kinda never let them read my stuff, I'm shy about things like that, lol :P Katie shy!? yup yup! lol. =)~
Ps. Watch out for those Buffalo Eating Fruit Loopz ;)
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| Re: Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah |
2-Apr-03/1:03 PM |
(cough) uh huh.. =\ *cough* waco *cough*
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| Re: if tommorow never comes by junkyarddog13 |
2-Apr-03/12:57 PM |
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Welcome to poemranker junkyarddog! =) I like what you have done here there are some parts that can be cleaned up, and revised, but ann in all I gave it a 7 =)
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| Re: Isolate by Beseech |
31-Mar-03/1:17 PM |
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Beseech don't listen to wink minded people like 'lark angel' just feel sorry for them since they have nothing better to do then to TRY and pray on people. I honestly Like this 9 :)
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| Re: The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw |
28-Mar-03/4:48 AM |
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I agree with Stephen...filth
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| Re: a comment on As I lay by Katie |
3-Feb-03/9:02 AM |
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| Re: MY LOVE FOR YOU by Normo |
31-Jan-03/8:26 PM |
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Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)
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| Re: a comment on Days by Katie |
16-Dec-02/4:07 PM |
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LMAO. I'm not a kid, lol. And shawn isn't my bf, just a close firend, not to get confussed with a friend with benefits! But anyways, you thought I was pretending to be a guy!? oh my!! ahh...I think I might just take that poem right out of here, if that's what people are beging to think! And whats up with young, blonde and floridian? (it's BLONDE, just so ya know ;) lettin a little kid (lmao) correct your spelling sham on u!)
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| Re: No Idea by Miggy |
22-Nov-02/8:11 AM |
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Another one of your great little songs...so young with such a talent!! Good job once agian
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| Re: A little by The Eskimo King |
11-Nov-02/10:17 AM |
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Shouldn't it be "A little bit of something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay" ( you left out the of )and um...this is just something you threw together wasn't it...It ryhemes yes, but it's not...poetic, lol.
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| Re: Base by Freya |
10-Nov-02/10:19 AM |
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Interesting I must say, Interesting indeed. This poem consists of some lists...but I like that, and I like this poem...it's a new theme I have never read before...or seen, and I like it! 10 =) Good Work!
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| Re: a comment on Hells Game by Katie |
6-Nov-02/2:35 PM |
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No No, I do that and another war will begin in my comments. ~*I put a spell on you...and now your all mine....haha jk =)*~
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| Re: a comment on Hells Game by Katie |
5-Nov-02/7:07 AM |
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Thank you Unity for coment, I went back and changed those spelling boo-boo's, as you can kinda tell I'm bad about that kind of stuff. But thanks!! and GUESS WHO'S BACK...BACK AGIAN...GUESS WHO'S BACK...TELL A FRIEND...haha JK!!!! But thanks agian for the help! =)
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| Re: Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford |
5-Nov-02/7:01 AM |
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Deep. I can't say I understand this poem fully, but I do like it very much so! =)
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