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MY LOVE FOR YOU

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Sep 2002 · 7 comments

My Love For You Feels good, Feels right I long to hold you Through the night When we touch When we kiss How can anything Feel better than this Now it's ended I will endeavour My love for you Will last forever

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10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

7 comments

[6] Nicholas Jones 29-Sep-02/4:56 AM Reply

Not bad - and the last stanza is stronger than the first two.

[n/a] Normo › Nicholas Jones 10-Oct-02/6:06 AM Reply

You used a word i dont understand ;)

[6] Mutant_X 29-Sep-02/5:22 AM Reply

it's good but it's more like a song than a poem,it has a good rhyming

[n/a] Normo › Mutant_X 10-Oct-02/6:06 AM Reply

Fair enough

[7] jauser 6-Oct-02/2:12 PM Reply

Wow, this is so touching... it make me cried. HAHA LOL

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And seven, you got

[n/a] Normo › jauser 10-Oct-02/6:05 AM Reply

Thanks mate

[8] Katie 31-Jan-03/8:26 PM Reply

Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)