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MY LOVE FOR YOU (Free verse) by Normo My Love For You
Feels good, Feels right
I long to hold you
Through the night
When we touch
When we kiss
How can anything
Feel better than this
Now it's ended
I will endeavour
My love for you
Will last forever
Up the ladder:
Just One More Time
Down the ladder:
Beyond Imagination
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.7
Posted: September 29, 2002 3:04 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2002 3:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.85 Overall Rank: 10584 Comments:
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Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200
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29-Sep-02/4:56 AM
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Not bad - and the last stanza is stronger than the first two.
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Normo @ 212.159.89.111
> Nicholas Jones
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10-Oct-02/6:06 AM
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You used a word i dont understand ;)
it's good but it's more like a song than a poem,it has a good rhyming
Fair enough
Wow, this is so touching... it make me cried. HAHA LOL
7 And seven, you got
Thanks mate
Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)
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