| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Beyond Imagination (Free verse) by vulcan After her funeral procession
Now to confront the kitty's gaze
Was beyond his power of imagination.
Up the ladder:
MY LOVE FOR YOU
Down the ladder:
The Morris Minor Rap
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.7
Posted: October 6, 2002 11:51 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 3:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.85 Overall Rank: 10591 Comments:
[n/a]
Flattop @ 203.12.53.68
|
7-Oct-02/2:06 AM
|
Reply
depth and ambiguity... lovely
ACtually the ambiguity is great here, it's hard to get a handle on preicsely what's going on with the 'kitty', and the feeling of loss is somehow reflected in that
*shivers* I think I want a little more, but maybe not ...
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
hooray.0.
i am going to feature your poetry tonight on my show me thinks.
297 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
