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Just One More Time

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Jun 2002 · 5 comments

I'm sure I heard it breathing softly nestled in a sigh I thought I felt it on my skin then dreamed it was a lie But now I'm blocking out the sun while clinging to the burn just to hear it one more time I need another turn

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5 comments

[8] horus8 11-Jul-02/12:30 AM Reply

Keep going??

[7] -=SeTTle=- 19-Jul-02/8:23 PM Reply

I wanted it rare, bring me another.

[8] <~> 3-Sep-02/7:34 AM Reply

oh! the last line is too weak. the rest of it is great, though.

[6] hipster flare 29-Sep-03/10:59 AM Reply

Is this a sex poem? about getting a rash? poison ivy?

[3] Stephen Robins 28-Jun-04/6:21 AM Reply

I should smite your face with a mighty cudgel for such a terrible poem. However as you remind me of the Katie to whose memory I still cling, like a pair of pants to an old man's crotch, I award you a fairly indifferent -7-