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Just One More Time (Free verse) by KatieKaBoom

I'm sure I heard it breathing softly nestled in a sigh I thought I felt it on my skin then dreamed it was a lie But now I'm blocking out the sun while clinging to the burn just to hear it one more time I need another turn

<~> 3-Sep-02/7:34 AM
oh! the last line is too weak. the rest of it is great, though.




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