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Awakening (Free verse) by Sterling5583
I lay in my bed, in a state of lassitude.
In a lackluster room, and melancholy mood.
I'm feeling depressed, and that life is irrelevant.
When, in the labyrinth of my mind, there's an extraordinary event.
The image of a girl I begin to see.
This is not meant as a lampoon, she is special to me.
My love for her is strong and irrefutable.
In the jargon of love, she is beyond beautiful.
Her smile is like a pinball machine; it lights up the room.
It has stopped me from looking forward to my tomb.
I adore her for her judicious mind.
She is truly unique, one of a kind.
This wonderful girl has kindled my spirit.
But that celestial body, I would never be near it.
If there is to be any hope, I must lose my laconic attitude.
And also abandon my life of voluntary solitude.
When times become rough, I think of her to cope.
Her optimistic attitude reminds me, that there is always hope.
It is to her and that pinball smile I dedicate this to.
I have found the love of my life, and I hope she feels that way too.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.7
Weighted score: 4.85
Overall Rank: 10588
Posted: June 6, 2002 6:55 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 6:55 AM PDT
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