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Just One More Time (Free verse) by KatieKaBoom

I'm sure I heard it breathing softly nestled in a sigh I thought I felt it on my skin then dreamed it was a lie But now I'm blocking out the sun while clinging to the burn just to hear it one more time I need another turn

Stephen Robins 28-Jun-04/6:21 AM
I should smite your face with a mighty cudgel for such a terrible poem. However as you remind me of the Katie to whose memory I still cling, like a pair of pants to an old man's crotch, I award you a fairly indifferent -7-




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