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MY LOVE FOR YOU (Free verse) by Normo

My Love For You Feels good, Feels right I long to hold you Through the night When we touch When we kiss How can anything Feel better than this Now it's ended I will endeavour My love for you Will last forever

Nicholas Jones 29-Sep-02/4:56 AM
Not bad - and the last stanza is stronger than the first two.




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