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MY LOVE FOR YOU (Free verse) by Normo

My Love For You Feels good, Feels right I long to hold you Through the night When we touch When we kiss How can anything Feel better than this Now it's ended I will endeavour My love for you Will last forever

Katie 31-Jan-03/8:26 PM
Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)




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