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Sonnet № 88462

i need a title

by That One

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Feb 2004 · 8 comments

By the old barn where we used to play where we would come to just such harm im not missing you anyway we lived the kind of lifestyle they could've made a realtiey show your green face sullen while your body was buried in the snow the moment the knife dropped, your heart halt another camera for the show propped, not my fault.

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8 comments

[5] horus8 11-Feb-04/10:51 PM Reply
A title's the least of your worries, I'm afraid.
[6] richa 12-Feb-04/8:18 AM Reply
Third line get rid of just
Spell realitye correctly
And try and make the final four lines make sense.

In terms of a title - find a theme in the poem, or write a startling image. That could be used as the title.
[n/a] That One 13-Feb-04/4:39 PM Reply
such clever critique you make for me. How's that working out for you?
[n/a] That One 13-Feb-04/4:39 PM Reply
such clever critique you make for me. How's that working out for you?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › That One 14-Feb-04/5:29 AM Reply
Is English your first language?
[n/a] That One 16-Feb-04/10:16 PM Reply
no viet is
[n/a] Katie 23-Aug-05/11:56 AM Reply
Aren't Sonnets suppose to have 10 syllables in each line?!
[8] Heather Dee 11-Sep-05/6:37 AM Reply
I like..............