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i need a title (Sonnet) by That One

By the old barn where we used to play where we would come to just such harm im not missing you anyway we lived the kind of lifestyle they could've made a realtiey show your green face sullen while your body was buried in the snow the moment the knife dropped, your heart halt another camera for the show propped, not my fault.

richa 12-Feb-04/8:18 AM
Third line get rid of just
Spell realitye correctly
And try and make the final four lines make sense.

In terms of a title - find a theme in the poem, or write a startling image. That could be used as the title.




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