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Base (Free verse) by Freya
Base... Beating Pumping Screaming Dreaming Laughing Crying Feeling Healing Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all Base... Changing Connecting Touching Seeing Creating Being Needing WAKING! Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all The heart of me The womb of me The heat of me The best of me Becoming... Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all The connected heartbeat. Base.

Up the ladder: Pismo shack
Down the ladder: eyes

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3616
Posted: November 10, 2002 2:25 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2002 2:25 AM PST
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[10] Katie @ 65.56.78.210 | 10-Nov-02/10:19 AM | Reply
Interesting I must say, Interesting indeed. This poem consists of some lists...but I like that, and I like this poem...it's a new theme I have never read before...or seen, and I like it! 10 =) Good Work!
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