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Base (Free verse) by Freya

Base... Beating Pumping Screaming Dreaming Laughing Crying Feeling Healing Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all Base... Changing Connecting Touching Seeing Creating Being Needing WAKING! Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all The heart of me The womb of me The heat of me The best of me Becoming... Base... Pulsating through my soul Rising above it all Pulsating through my soul Rising... Rising... Rising.. Above it all The connected heartbeat. Base.

Katie 10-Nov-02/10:19 AM
Interesting I must say, Interesting indeed. This poem consists of some lists...but I like that, and I like this poem...it's a new theme I have never read before...or seen, and I like it! 10 =) Good Work!




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