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Have You Ever Been In Love?

by Katie

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Jun 2003 · 10 comments

Have you ever been in love…? Like a shooting star, Moonlight you could hold in your arms… Warming your heart, And lighting your darkened path. Vulgar Have you ever been in love, And felt the sun shine, Or walked on a cloud for the very first time. Have you ever been in love, And felt the wind whisk through your hair, Saw the earth with all her beauty, And couldn’t help but stair… Have you ever been in love?

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[6] horus8 3-Jun-03/8:26 PM Reply
Stare you twat.
[n/a] wCUNTw › horus8 4-Jun-03/1:40 AM Reply
Don't be rude. The inclusion of the word "vulgar" confuses me somewhat, though.
[n/a] Bachus › wCUNTw 4-Jun-03/10:39 AM Reply
Shut up, only a twat would confuse traversing levels (stairs) with the prolonged fixation of one's visual organs (stare).
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › horus8 4-Jun-03/6:02 AM Reply
horus8, you can be so mean. Sometimes I worry that you might be driving people away from the site. I pray to Jesu that this is not so.
[10] loneshadow29 › horus8 4-Jun-03/1:17 PM Reply
The more I see of your savage, disgusting, hurtful words... the more I wished that the ice covering your black heart would melt away... but I guess that's wishful thinking huh?

But on a brighter note... Good job Katie...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › loneshadow29 4-Jun-03/1:28 PM Reply
Yes... yes, what a chilling, true way of putting it: the ice covering his black heart. Simply beautiful.
[n/a] Katie › loneshadow29 5-Jun-03/5:53 PM Reply
Thanks for the comment Brandon, and I have your e-maiol typed up, I just gotta get the chance to send it, work is really hecktic yah know? BUt thanks for the friendship poem, I loved it!! and on the other note, you guys know my complanning about him, and everything, is just making him do it more? that's what he wants, just ignore him and he'll go away. =P *muahs*
[n/a] Islander 4-Jun-03/10:33 AM Reply
Don't worry he'll not drive people away from the site!!!
[10] Stephen Robins 1-Oct-03/8:15 AM Reply
I literally can not stop coming.
[2] Goad 23-Jan-05/4:40 PM Reply
no Katie, sadly I've never been in love :(

I think probably few people here have ever been in love. Love is quite rare, and you are fortunate indeed to have experienced it. But though we may not experience cloud-walking, moonlight-embracing love itself, we are blessed to have you describe it for us, so that we may experience it vicariously.

Perhaps someday I will experience love, before I die. For now I can only solace myself with 10 dollar blowjobs from cheap whores and excessive masturbation, and -- occasionally, delightfully -- a brief second-hand glimpse of love when narrated by blesséd souls such as yourself.

P.S.
It's been more than an entire fucking year, fix your spelling mistake you mindless bint.