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Have You Ever Been In Love? (Free verse) by Katie

Have you ever been in love…? Like a shooting star, Moonlight you could hold in your arms… Warming your heart, And lighting your darkened path. Vulgar Have you ever been in love, And felt the sun shine, Or walked on a cloud for the very first time. Have you ever been in love, And felt the wind whisk through your hair, Saw the earth with all her beauty, And couldn’t help but stair… Have you ever been in love?

loneshadow29 4-Jun-03/1:17 PM
The more I see of your savage, disgusting, hurtful words... the more I wished that the ice covering your black heart would melt away... but I guess that's wishful thinking huh?

But on a brighter note... Good job Katie...




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