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Have You Ever Been In Love? (Free verse) by Katie

Have you ever been in loveâ¦? Like a shooting star, Moonlight you could hold in your armsâ¦ Warming your heart, And lighting your darkened path. Vulgar Have you ever been in love, And felt the sun shine, Or walked on a cloud for the very first time. Have you ever been in love, And felt the wind whisk through your hair, Saw the earth with all her beauty, And couldnât help but stairâ¦ Have you ever been in love?

Goad

23-Jan-05/4:40 PM

no Katie, sadly I've never been in love :(

I think probably few people here have ever been in love. Love is quite rare, and you are fortunate indeed to have experienced it. But though we may not experience cloud-walking, moonlight-embracing love itself, we are blessed to have you describe it for us, so that we may experience it vicariously.

Perhaps someday I will experience love, before I die. For now I can only solace myself with 10 dollar blowjobs from cheap whores and excessive masturbation, and -- occasionally, delightfully -- a brief second-hand glimpse of love when narrated by blessÃ©d souls such as yourself.

P.S.
It's been more than an entire fucking year, fix your spelling mistake you mindless bint.

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