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A little (Free verse) by The Eskimo King
A little bit something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay!!

Up the ladder: Everything (A Song)
Down the ladder: Tom and Jerry

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.5293527
Overall Rank: 12733
Posted: November 11, 2002 7:37 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 7:37 AM PST
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[5] Katie @ 63.208.91.158 | 11-Nov-02/10:17 AM | Reply
Shouldn't it be "A little bit of something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay" ( you left out the of )and um...this is just something you threw together wasn't it...It ryhemes yes, but it's not...poetic, lol.
[n/a] The Eskimo King @ 212.219.142.161 > Katie | 12-Nov-02/2:18 AM | Reply
Well done, i did miss out the 'of'
Now, stop abusing my poem, this is my first day, so i am quite offended
[3] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Nov-02/10:50 AM | Reply
i think katie that the lad is a them cockneed king of the eskimo which would explain the complete dissappearance of the word..well..."of". another one of the queens blessings besides her borderline inbred gene pool..(also the same reasons why pedigrees are in fact just the opposite) take the bulldog and the persian cat for example they die quite young from breathing complications and hip problems...one could then argue..well the queen is really old and breathes fine. only because she has never done a single physical task of labor ever so there has been less wear and tear on her body.point being...i have no fucking idea.what was i talking about again..ah yeah. queens.3.
[n/a] The Eskimo King @ 212.219.142.161 > Bachus | 12-Nov-02/2:19 AM | Reply
Shut up bastard
[n/a] joey @ 212.219.142.161 | 12-Nov-02/2:43 AM | Reply
random...again! bit more interesting than the one i gave 2 to!!! hehe! nah, im being harsh, they are very good!
[n/a] Tom Colebrooke @ 212.219.142.161 | 18-Nov-02/7:31 AM | Reply
Interesting
[10] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 9-Jan-03/5:30 AM | Reply
True, true.
Nutin' watchin a Bud, havin a game...Sssssap?
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