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A little (Free verse) by The Eskimo King

A little bit something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay!!

Katie 11-Nov-02/10:17 AM
Shouldn't it be "A little bit of something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay" ( you left out the of )and um...this is just something you threw together wasn't it...It ryhemes yes, but it's not...poetic, lol.




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