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Everything (A Song) (Other) by mraverage7801
It hurts when we're together, It hurts when we're apart. I wish this moment could last forever. She reminds me of what I can't have, Of what I can't get, I knew it from the first second we met. All our friends think were perfect I feel the same. I told her my pain, How I feel totally wrecked. She means more to me than anything, everything When I was with her I felt complete, Sometimes I'd want to lie down in the street. Id close my eyes, think of the past, Tell me why it had to go bye so fast. They would ask "why isn't she here?" Id shrug my shoulders as if I had nothing to fear I wish I could go back and change what I said, I'm so f**king lame I deserve what I'm getting. I'm thinking of the future, sweating I feel like I'm better off dead. All our friends think were perfect I feel the same. I told her my pain, How I feel totally wrecked. She means more to me than anything, everything No matter what, she'll still be there, Her eyes make it all right. I hope all this is just a scare. Let me kiss her good night

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.5293527
Overall Rank: 12705
Posted: November 9, 2002 10:52 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2002 10:52 PM PST
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