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Tom and Jerry (Haiku) by WarrenGDawg Mouse crawling in hole
Evades cunning feline hunt...
...er, just getting cheese
Up the ladder:
A little
Down the ladder:
Life/Death (revised)
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Posted: May 11, 2002 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 11:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.523713 Overall Rank: 12734 Comments:
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11-May-02/11:11 PM
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After returning from the Ann Arbor art museum I'd thought I'd seen some of the best my community had to offer - until I saw this. WarrenGDawg, you are the most gifted and eloquent, most subtle but effective, most adroit and multi-platformed author I've seen since Poe. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what you produce in the future.
FUNNY AND PROVOCATIVE
I'm amazed by how many of these things I like: is this one meant to sound obscene?
Damned mouse. Damned coy mouse.
the cliche title may weaken this...
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