Re: TONIGHT by adrenalize	30-Oct-02/6:24 PM
I think the first stanza would sound better like this: Tonight the rain is falling But Iv run out of tears Because crying in the rain Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)
Re: ... by logun2002ya	28-Oct-02/10:46 AM
hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^
Re: a comment on Midnight Dream by Katie	25-Oct-02/5:10 AM
If you didn't pay attention to the comment I mad after Miggy's, It's A JOKE!! With me and one of my friends Jeff. But I do agree with your point.
Re: a comment on Midnight Dream by Katie	16-Oct-02/1:43 PM
No worries Miggy, it didn't happen, it's just a joke me and my friend Jeff have. I didn't expect it to do as well as it as, but I am glad it did, and I got some interesting reponses from it!! But sorry no I'm not some chick that goes out cybering, I myself find it childish, and...ewww'ish!! =) hehe.
Re: A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke	14-Oct-02/8:36 AM
Interesting point of view tom...interesting...lol...hehe But I like bumblebees, hehe so I give yeah a 10 =) hehe go bumblebees!! ^..^ =(0)= Meow
Re: Daywalker by Blade	14-Oct-02/6:55 AM
God, won't you guy's please stop bickering...if you haven't noticed the point of this site is to post your poems, and help other peolpe fix theres. Blade, don't listen to some of the asses on this site, It's a nice poem, yes it does need some touchs up, but other than that I like it. I give it a ~*5*~ =)
Re: Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator	10-Oct-02/9:33 AM
Cript is a big gang where i'm from, there everywhere, and most people here are scared of them. I do know guy's that are just like what you said in your poem...but there haveing a hard time getting out, it's not as easy as it says, but now about the poem, I like your idea for this...it's something no one else here so far I believe has tried, yet stuff like that happens in life...alot. I give it a 7/10 =)
Re: Which Side of Darkness by Wulf	9-Oct-02/7:12 AM
I'm sorry i didn't see this poem sooner. I love the poem you have writen here. It's an interesting perseptive, and flow. 10/10 =) And I can't wait to read more of your work =)
Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator	9-Oct-02/5:02 AM
um...dang it...nope I can't say I can whisel my way out of that one DA, but still mocking me with out a jk, or indicating that you where 'messin' around. LoL!! =) and I know your not slow...and I don't mean to give off this Bitch aperience...and good poem Anthony
Re: a comment on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator	8-Oct-02/10:38 AM
You know dark angel get a life, dang it. I was messing around for anyone who is to slow to figure that out...not saying any names (DA)
Re: Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29	8-Oct-02/10:00 AM
Brandon, another great poem! I like the feel of this one, I like the point of the whole thing. This poem was really interesting to me. Keep up the good work brandon!! And good luck at work!!
Re: A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator	7-Oct-02/6:51 PM
Snif Snif...I'm going to cry...that's so sweet!! she's a lucky girl, damn I won't a guy to write a poem for me, but the only thing they think of is how the hell there gonna get me in bed...but ne ways, LOL I love this poem, hehe I love your work!! 10/10 =)
Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator	7-Oct-02/6:45 PM
Okay...I'm a blonde!! I'm not a bembo :( snif snif, not all us blondes are little whores you know? I'm not vein, but I am attractive, and I'm still a virgine...Imagine that...and I'm not a slut :) so not all blondes are bad, hehe. Okay enough of that, I get what you are reffering too. But besides that I love you poem!! I can't wait to read more of your work!! 9/10 =)
Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29	7-Oct-02/1:00 PM
Hey shadow! Long time no see!! Well I've been waiting for your next poem then...there it is. hehe. Well hm...you should know me by now...I don't like when people go on about nothing, just mindless chitter chatter...it bugs the heck out of me, and it's just a waste of space. But this poem isn't like that!!! =) I love it, great poem, and I like your point of view! 9/10 =)
Re: a comment on Wondering Soul by Katie	30-Sep-02/8:36 AM
Never did I say I wanted this to make sence, and I could find proper adjectives, but I rather leave it as is =) Oh yeah, and I like to add I liek English, but I'm not good at it =)
Re: Wedding Day... by loneshadow29	24-Sep-02/4:30 AM
I like the idea of this poem, it's one no one else here has tried, So it's something new for a change. and even if you don't like it..well it means something to him anyway, so unless you have something nice to say, or advice to make the poem any better, then don't say anything at all. I think it's a great poem shadow! =)
Re: A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29	24-Sep-02/4:24 AM
*snif*snif, that's so pretty!! It's a 10 all the way
Re: My Gift to You by loneshadow29	19-Sep-02/4:45 AM
*snif, snif* It's so...beautiful. I like!! 9/10
Re: Words Only of Love by loneshadow29	19-Sep-02/4:40 AM
Awww. I like this poem shadow! Cute, sweet, it's just awwww. LoL. good work. 9/10
Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR	13-Sep-02/12:26 PM
Me like!! 10/10 great poem indeed =)