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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya getn high
watchn time tick by
as my soul goes back
in time
red wine
from your lips eye'll drink
as a memory of you
eye ponder
eye think
to potent for me
eye am drunk again
off the wine of your love
damn
this must be a sin...
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Posted: October 28, 2002 1:48 AM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 1:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11812 Comments:
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Katie @ 169.139.16.2
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28-Oct-02/10:46 AM
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hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^
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logun2002ya @ 64.12.96.139
> Katie
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29-Oct-02/5:10 PM
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thank you...eye have a lot more but eye can only put up three...eye usually just get assholes replying with comments like "you suck eye is spelt I not e y e...even a looser knows that"...owell...gotta take the good with the bad...
u suck but not cuz u spelt i wrong. u suck cuz this poem is s-h-i-t-e.
while your days are filled with mocking the spade, mine are filled with capturing the shade...the color of light, from the glimpse of a site, you will never see...for you curse yourself, when you try and curse me...
aww... kyoot.
eye think you're wright
no.actually..that's perfectly natural.
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