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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

getn high watchn time tick by as my soul goes back in time red wine from your lips eye'll drink as a memory of you eye ponder eye think to potent for me eye am drunk again off the wine of your love damn this must be a sin...

limonade 29-Oct-02/9:37 PM
u suck but not cuz u spelt i wrong. u suck cuz this poem is s-h-i-t-e.




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