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Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Been alright since you've gone Sleeping with Alanis on Silently screaming Alarm bells ringing Crying without tears Laughing in my ears When I'm weak-I'm strong Of course nothing's wrong No use in breaking down Is anyone around? Caffinated high Blood-shot eyes I feel I could die! Never been this defenseless I can't even make sense of this

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[6] <~> 8-Nov-02/9:05 PM Reply

this feels like a lyric, but wears a little thin at the end.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Nov-02/9:00 AM Reply

Ask yourself this: Did I call my poeme '(no title)' because it is too profound to have a title, or did I call it '(no title)' because the only accurate title would be 'generic teenage poeme'?

[n/a] savagelymakeitcount › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Nov-02/9:13 AM Reply

Generic teenage poeme

[n/a] horus8 17-Nov-03/5:49 PM Reply

Call it "Thermos"