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(no title) (Free verse) by savagelymakeitcount Been alright since you've gone
Sleeping with Alanis on
Silently screaming
Alarm bells ringing
Crying without tears
Laughing in my ears
When I'm weak-I'm strong
Of course nothing's wrong
No use in breaking down
Is anyone around?
Caffinated high
Blood-shot eyes
I feel I could die!
Never been this defenseless
I can't even make sense of this
Up the ladder:
...
Down the ladder:
Caged World
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Posted: November 8, 2002 8:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 8:18 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11812 Comments:
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8-Nov-02/9:05 PM
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this feels like a lyric, but wears a little thin at the end.
Ask yourself this: Did I call my poeme '(no title)' because it is too profound to have a title, or did I call it '(no title)' because the only accurate title would be 'generic teenage poeme'?
Generic teenage poeme
Call it "Thermos"
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