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(no title) (Free verse) by savagelymakeitcount

Been alright since you've gone Sleeping with Alanis on Silently screaming Alarm bells ringing Crying without tears Laughing in my ears When I'm weak-I'm strong Of course nothing's wrong No use in breaking down Is anyone around? Caffinated high Blood-shot eyes I feel I could die! Never been this defenseless I can't even make sense of this

<~> 8-Nov-02/9:05 PM
this feels like a lyric, but wears a little thin at the end.




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