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Caged World (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle
This reality cripples us, leaves us mamed,
our five physical phrophets lead us astray.
Through my hatred i rise in flame,
i swear to live another way
To do what makes you happy, a simple vision,
persecuted by every religion.
A dog that will not chase the stick,
institutionalised, then rehabilitated with a kick.
Defects from the human production line,
riddiculed, never given a chance to shine.
I eludicate this point to you, are you kind?
look again, ignorant and blind.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
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Posted: December 17, 2002 12:39 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2002 12:39 PM PST
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reads like a bunch of cliches strung together. :/