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Caged World (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle

This reality cripples us, leaves us mamed, our five physical phrophets lead us astray. Through my hatred i rise in flame, i swear to live another way To do what makes you happy, a simple vision, persecuted by every religion. A dog that will not chase the stick, institutionalised, then rehabilitated with a kick. Defects from the human production line, riddiculed, never given a chance to shine. I eludicate this point to you, are you kind? look again, ignorant and blind.

Caducus 19-Dec-02/8:59 AM
'Maimed' for the perfectionist in you. this strong piece should not be weakened by spelling errors now bend over boy !

WHATTTEEEEEEESH !

the 1st 4 lines stanza 2 are awesome. 7-




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