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TONIGHT (Free verse) by adrenalize Tonight the rain is falling
But Ive run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never does take away the pain
Tonight I am thinking about you
Do I ever figure in your memory
So what category do I belong to
Difficult, bad mistake or who?
Tonight I stand among people termed as friends
Yet I feel like a stranger in town
Have you ever felt that way
Or you still dont understand anything I say
Tonight everything seems in equilibrium
Everything that is except me
But then that would be asking too much
Always did have the restless streak in me
Tonight Im going to turn things around
Had enough of wasting time
Of trying to wait for things to happen
Because you never were my number one
Tonight Im going to find myself someone who loves me
Like I tried to love you
And soon youll just be like a distant star
Millions of light years away
Up the ladder:
DID YOU EVER?
Down the ladder:
Obstacle In Between
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Posted: October 30, 2002 2:15 PM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2002 2:15 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.577378 Overall Rank: 12586 Comments:
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But Iv run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)