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DID YOU EVER? (Free verse) by emrldeyz79
DID YOU EVER LOVE SOMEONE BUT KNEW THEY DID NOT CARE? DID YOU EVER WANT TO CRY BUT KNEW IT WOULD GET YOU NOWHERE? DID YOU EVER LOOK INTO THEIR HEART AND WISH THAT YOU WERE THERE? DID YOU EVER WATCH THEM WALK AWAY, NOT WANTING THEM TO GO. AND WHISPER "GOD I LOVE YOU" BUT NEVER LET THEM KNOW? YOU WLL CRY ALL NIGHT IN MISERY AND ALMOST GO INSANE. THERE IS NOTHING IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD THAT CAUSES SO MUCH PAIN. IF I COULD CHOOSE BETWEEN LOVE AND DEATH, I THINK I WOULD RATHER DIE. LOVE IS FUN BUT IT HURTS SO MUCH. THE PRICE YOU PAY IS HIGH. AND SO MY FRIEND, YOU WILL BE HURT, YOU KNOW, BEFORE IT IS THROUGH, YOU SEE MY FRIEND, I OUGHT TO KNOW, FOR I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU.

Down the ladder: TONIGHT

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Weighted score: 4.577378
Overall Rank: 12590
Posted: September 16, 2002 2:24 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 2:24 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] Tintagiles @ 142.166.239.207 | 30-Oct-02/8:10 PM | Reply
Stop shouting. Please. My ears hurt.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Dec-02/4:58 PM | Reply
green is my favorite color dark forest green.....10.
[4] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 | 14-Jan-03/8:56 AM | Reply
Too mawkish in content. A bit of subtlety would help. It currently reads like a Hallmark card and the message offers nothing new. Sorry but this just doesn't work for me.
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