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Obstacle In Between (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl
This obstacle still stands
Within us in between
I still don't understand
What all of this could mean
It's still there in the road
Its there I can still see
It's getting smaller though
But still it's in the way of me
What is this object before
that stands in my way
It's big but smaller ever more
The thing that ruins my day
So what am i to do
It's keeping me from what I wish
Maybe it will show what's true
Or maybe something I'll later miss
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Weighted score: 4.577378
Overall Rank: 12592
Posted: November 7, 2002 8:39 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2002 8:39 PM PST
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