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Free verse № 24302

Obstacle In Between

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

This obstacle still stands Within us in between I still don't understand What all of this could mean It's still there in the road Its there I can still see It's getting smaller though But still it's in the way of me What is this object before that stands in my way It's big but smaller ever more The thing that ruins my day So what am i to do It's keeping me from what I wish Maybe it will show what's true Or maybe something I'll later miss

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[7] Caducus 13-Nov-02/6:47 AM Reply
COOL