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Obstacle In Between (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl
This obstacle still stands Within us in between I still don't understand What all of this could mean It's still there in the road Its there I can still see It's getting smaller though But still it's in the way of me What is this object before that stands in my way It's big but smaller ever more The thing that ruins my day So what am i to do It's keeping me from what I wish Maybe it will show what's true Or maybe something I'll later miss

Up the ladder: TONIGHT
Down the ladder: Superman VS. The Stairs

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4285715
Weighted score: 4.577378
Overall Rank: 12587
Posted: November 7, 2002 8:39 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2002 8:39 PM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 13-Nov-02/6:47 AM | Reply
COOL
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