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My Gift to You (Free verse) by loneshadow29
I live through my dark existance only to bask in your beauty your eyes that shine like saphires your smile that brightens even my sad existance I envy the wind that runs through your hair that touches your lips I long to touch you to hold you in my arms but I cannot for your heart belongs to another so, I can only love you from afar your friendship means more to me than anything this world provides but like an angel you touched my heart in a way that I've never felt before cause I've never known what love is until this day I know that we are only friends but my heart wishes it to be more so I will still hope and dream that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"

Up the ladder: Could You Know?
Down the ladder: coffee cup

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8888888
Weighted score: 4.4444447
Overall Rank: 12902
Posted: September 4, 2002 12:10 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 12:10 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Katie @ 169.139.16.2 | 19-Sep-02/4:45 AM | Reply
*snif, snif* It's so...beautiful. I like!! 9/10
[n/a] loneshadow29 @ 63.80.251.73 > Katie | 23-Sep-02/9:18 AM | Reply
Thanks for the comment... to be honest, this is one of the few poems that I am truly proud of... :o)
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