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My Gift to You (Free verse) by loneshadow29
I live through my dark existance
only to bask in your beauty
your eyes that shine like saphires
your smile that brightens even my sad existance
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
that touches your lips
I long to touch you
to hold you in my arms but I cannot
for your heart belongs to another
so, I can only love you from afar
your friendship means more to me
than anything this world provides
but like an angel you touched my heart
in a way that I've never felt before
cause I've never known what love is until this day
I know that we are only friends
but my heart wishes it to be more
so I will still hope and dream
that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine
to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8888888
Weighted score: 4.4444447
Overall Rank: 12902
Posted: September 4, 2002 12:10 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 12:10 PM PDT
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