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My Gift to You (Free verse) by loneshadow29

I live through my dark existance only to bask in your beauty your eyes that shine like saphires your smile that brightens even my sad existance I envy the wind that runs through your hair that touches your lips I long to touch you to hold you in my arms but I cannot for your heart belongs to another so, I can only love you from afar your friendship means more to me than anything this world provides but like an angel you touched my heart in a way that I've never felt before cause I've never known what love is until this day I know that we are only friends but my heart wishes it to be more so I will still hope and dream that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"

loneshadow29 23-Sep-02/9:18 AM
Thanks for the comment... to be honest, this is one of the few poems that I am truly proud of... :o)




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