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After Halloween (Other) by Limness
Dust violet powders the distance
Displaced sunset sneaks in under
Glaucomic clouds that steal my light
Silver smooth skinned ghosts
Don November's steely greys
Tall thin reachers-out-over roads
Mix timbered fingers in the air
Incanting their alchemy
Winter comes, Winter comes
The sky a scaled and inverse sea
Night is early
To feast on rusted hills
Her cape subdues the heated trees
Summer is old, jilted
Her bright sun left angry
Burnt colors onto trees
Orange yellow red flamed alight
Bright, brief, fallen now
Whisper quietly,
Cooly fade to browns
Crisp skeletons
Circling scatterings,
Pageantry abandoned
Airs shift drifts of papery hues past due
Feet meet nothing solid, so
Deep I slide and swim in them
And, feeling Frost
I take a narrow path
Towards home, where
Sleep lies, miles away
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.928571
Weighted score: 5.67884
Overall Rank: 2000
Posted: September 9, 2002 9:10 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2002 7:56 AM PDT
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