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Curse (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer Circular thoughts put into a line
The thoughts put down don`t match mine
I can't say what I need you to hear
Words say so much less than this love and fear
Love doesn`t say all I feel at the time
My fear can`t be put in a simple rhyme
A poet`s love passes paper and pen
A poet`s craft fails him again
Failed letters of love scrached through
So many failed tries at telling you
Broken pencils and a poet`s cusre
What he feels most fits no verse
Up the ladder:
Satan wants me for a scarecrow
Down the ladder:
Torn...
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Posted: September 12, 2002 12:26 AM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2002 12:26 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7727275 Overall Rank: 11371 Comments:
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Katie @ 169.139.16.2
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13-Sep-02/8:54 AM
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=) I like it, not complicated, but yet it's still a wonderfull poem, cootos!! 9/10 =)
Pleasant enough. Couple of typos.7.
line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??
Wicked
Childish rhyme scheme, boring mssage. Did you keep repeating "poet" so much to convince yourself that you actually are one? Man, I'm glad I don't have to worry about a poet's cusre. Oh, The Pain (tm) of onefingeruphiass's Deep Inexpressible Feelings(tm)!
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