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Curse (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer

Circular thoughts put into a line The thoughts put down don`t match mine I can't say what I need you to hear Words say so much less than this love and fear Love doesn`t say all I feel at the time My fear can`t be put in a simple rhyme A poet`s love passes paper and pen A poet`s craft fails him again Failed letters of love scrached through So many failed tries at telling you Broken pencils and a poet`s cusre What he feels most fits no verse

horus8 20-Dec-02/4:05 PM
line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??




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