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Violated (Lyric) by Ojiboch
Like it too much and it can escape Like it too much and it will escape Like it too much and it'll eat you inside Like it too much to survive Believe in what it likes to save Believe in what it likes to say Believe in what it likes to mourn Mourn, mourn, mourn it all Hate it to the point of like Like it to the point of hate Maybe like and hate both work Maybe like and hate both don't... Believe in what it likes to save Believe in what it likes to say Believe in what it likes to mourn Mourn, mourn, mourn it all Hate and like, mourn and guilt Guilt and hate, mourn and like Comfort in hate, mourn for guilt Like it too much and it will escape Hate it 'cause it could end in rape

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7241
Posted: September 4, 2002 3:48 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 2:41 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] vulcan @ 80.242.3.174 | 4-Sep-02/6:56 AM | Reply
The style fits the topic.liked it.
[6] Katie @ 169.139.16.2 | 13-Sep-02/9:05 AM | Reply
I like the 'lyric' you got here, nice flow, pretty well balanced, 6/10 =)
[5] hatedestruction @ 167.196.165.102 | 12-Jan-04/8:19 AM | Reply
whoa...
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