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Free verse № 13104

Oh Well

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Sep 2002 · Edited 10 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

This rhyme is for my brother, Cuz we love and hate each other. Oh well, what the hell, This ain't all I've got to tell. Short time apart we started life, And then we both divorced a wife. Oh well, play with Dames, Bend the rules, go down in flames. At first twas trikes, bikes then cars, Our lives became a bunch of scars. Oh well, there were fights, If I'd go left, he'd go right Use to love to go real fast, The odds were good that we might crash. Oh well, live and learn, Resulting gray Mom's concern. Folks said kids don't want no sheep, They kicked our butts so we'd compete. Oh well, really sad, One went to work, one turned bad. Both can say we are fathers, Must admit at times they're bothers. Oh well, live to tell, Younger ones bout when you fell. One burns on, one's lights gone out, Mad and alone, one shrugs and shouts, Oh well, screwed his chance Blew it off as circumstance.

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4 comments

[n/a] god'swife 4-Sep-02/9:13 AM Reply
the 'oh well's' destroy this poem.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Sep-02/8:39 PM Reply
THIS IS GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
[8] Ojiboch 5-Sep-02/2:21 AM Reply
Great poem!
[8] Katie 13-Sep-02/8:59 AM Reply
there's some spelling boo-boo's, but hell there alot in mine too! Bue over all, I love this poem! so i give you a 1/10! My true vote wil be a 8/10!!