World Crashes Down (Free verse) by SoulSlippedAway
As you hear a scarred voice from inside
You find some courage to run away
To the edge of the world of hideous wonders
Your world comes crashing down now
Tears fall from a dark red sky
People disappear into the shadows
And your alone standing in the open
As your world comes crashing down
Sanity becomes a deleted desire
Padded rooms filled with empty hope
Minds so callous and hateful
And Your world crashes down once more
Shivering madness screams with anxiety
Flashing memories of long ago smiles
Last resort to hurtful nothing
Your world crashes down silently
And your hope for discovery just disappeared
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8543
Posted: August 20, 2002 11:15 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2002 7:32 PM PDT
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