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World Crashes Down (Free verse) by SoulSlippedAway
As you hear a scarred voice from inside You find some courage to run away To the edge of the world of hideous wonders Your world comes crashing down now Tears fall from a dark red sky People disappear into the shadows And your alone standing in the open As your world comes crashing down Sanity becomes a deleted desire Padded rooms filled with empty hope Minds so callous and hateful And Your world crashes down once more Shivering madness screams with anxiety Flashing memories of long ago smiles Last resort to hurtful nothing Your world crashes down silently And your hope for discovery just disappeared

Down the ladder: Oh Well

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8543
Posted: August 20, 2002 11:15 AM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2002 7:32 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 20-Aug-02/11:38 AM | Reply
Nothing important or interesting distinguishes you from anyone else of your age, race, sex and nationality. Go away and do not return.
[3] evergreen @ 165.247.108.174 | 20-Aug-02/4:19 PM | Reply
this is rather disjointed. you may want to fix the spelling mistake in your title :)
[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Aug-02/4:40 PM | Reply
Do not listen to the winged avenger, he's just bitter, but he's also got the talent to back up his point, so yes, you're dismissed, carry on winged one, next victim please!
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 213.122.42.179 | 23-Aug-02/8:21 PM | Reply
oh dirk let me sup on your angel delight once more. Umh tangy
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