| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Come Back to Me (Free verse) by jlanza I don't know how to tell you
The way that I'm feeling
My heart is broken
And it is just not healing
Because every thought I have
Is about the way you smile
But you're so far away
Three hundred lonely miles
I've fallen in love
Though I tried to resist
But you touched my heart
The moment we kissed
You whispered in my ear
The soft words you spoke
You held me as I slept
You kissed me as I woke
You touched me so gently
And held me so tight
I was floating on air
My heart was so light
Then you had to leave me
And you kissed me good-bye
My heart felt so empty
And I tried not to cry
And now you are gone
My love can't you see
What I'm trying to say
Is come back to me
Up the ladder:
melancholy:
Down the ladder:
crispy
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Posted: September 13, 2002 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 7:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.25 Overall Rank: 13179 Comments:
[9]
Katie @ 169.139.16.2
|
13-Sep-02/8:38 AM
|
Reply
!! love it, it's cute, but not complicated, there's some parts I would fix, but besides that I love it! 9/10!! =)
i should of finger banged you harder, but with my cactus, and a handful of dry mud. three hundred miles? that's not love sweety that's a mild crush. love, is a talking brain tumor and a late cable bill w/ a bit of movie popcorn in your hair..
ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart! It all adds up to the divine number 7. cuz I feel silly and whispy.
why not...write a poem about it?
106 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
