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crispy (Free verse) by skaskowski there's an open can of soup next to a pile of dead fireflies.
i like soup.
i'm going to eat that soup and maybe clean up those dead bugs.
err, i mean, insects.
even though they might be crunchy.
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Posted: September 15, 2002 9:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2002 9:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.25 Overall Rank: 13186 Comments:
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renwick @ 66.72.194.116
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15-Sep-02/10:10 PM
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Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.
why's it called crispy if it's crunchy? S.O.g.
will you glow in the dark afterwards, or is all the magic gone out of them>? is it tomato soup? i do love tomato soup.
the captain isn't on crunch berry island he's moved to the milky way, and i'm out one free shopping spree at toys r us. stupid crunch decoder ring was right...i just didn't think the cap[tain could breathe in outer space without a helmet. science can be a bit to decisive. so can i.
What are you trying to say with this piece?
i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5
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