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crispy (Free verse) by skaskowski
there's an open can of soup next to a pile of dead fireflies. i like soup. i'm going to eat that soup and maybe clean up those dead bugs. err, i mean, insects. even though they might be crunchy.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.25
Overall Rank: 13180
Posted: September 15, 2002 9:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2002 9:44 PM PDT
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[3] renwick @ 66.72.194.116 | 15-Sep-02/10:10 PM | Reply
Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.136.253 | 15-Sep-02/10:22 PM | Reply
why's it called crispy if it's crunchy? S.O.g.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Sep-02/7:39 AM | Reply
will you glow in the dark afterwards, or is all the magic gone out of them>? is it tomato soup? i do love tomato soup.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Sep-02/11:39 AM | Reply
the captain isn't on crunch berry island he's moved to the milky way, and i'm out one free shopping spree at toys r us. stupid crunch decoder ring was right...i just didn't think the cap[tain could breathe in outer space without a helmet. science can be a bit to decisive. so can i.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 16-Sep-02/11:43 AM | Reply
What are you trying to say with this piece?
[5] royalflesh @ 67.115.84.106 | 16-Sep-02/11:48 AM | Reply
i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5
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