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crispy

Member since 2001 · Posted 15 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

there's an open can of soup next to a pile of dead fireflies. i like soup. i'm going to eat that soup and maybe clean up those dead bugs. err, i mean, insects. even though they might be crunchy.

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[3] renwick 15-Sep-02/10:10 PM Reply

Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.

[n/a] god'swife 15-Sep-02/10:22 PM Reply

why's it called crispy if it's crunchy? S.O.g.

[n/a] <~> 16-Sep-02/7:39 AM Reply

will you glow in the dark afterwards, or is all the magic gone out of them>? is it tomato soup? i do love tomato soup.

[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 16-Sep-02/11:39 AM Reply

the captain isn't on crunch berry island he's moved to the milky way, and i'm out one free shopping spree at toys r us. stupid crunch decoder ring was right...i just didn't think the cap[tain could breathe in outer space without a helmet. science can be a bit to decisive. so can i.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Sep-02/11:43 AM Reply

What are you trying to say with this piece?

[5] royalflesh 16-Sep-02/11:48 AM Reply

i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5