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crispy (Free verse) by skaskowski

there's an open can of soup next to a pile of dead fireflies. i like soup. i'm going to eat that soup and maybe clean up those dead bugs. err, i mean, insects. even though they might be crunchy.

royalflesh 16-Sep-02/11:48 AM
i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5




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