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Satisfaction (Free verse) by Ojiboch At the top once again and I think this
time I'll spend some quality time where I'm at
But I've been here before and I've found it
a bore (there's nothing new to explore)
I'm fooling myself everytime, but I just can't resist
to always purposely miss and fuck myself over once more
But that's OK
Up the ladder:
I am Darkness
Down the ladder:
the place
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Posted: September 12, 2002 11:30 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2002 11:30 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5517645 Overall Rank: 12676 Comments:
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Katie @ 169.139.16.2
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13-Sep-02/8:33 AM
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over all it pretty good, try to add more detail =)
when you get there there's no there there ( D Parker i think) the old human condition again ... 5
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