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Free verse № 10168

I am Darkness

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

I cast a shadow over light. I echo through the cold night. I breath across valleys and plains. I hold the howling wind and torrential rain. I open a realm for shivering fear. I whisper spine chilling words in your ears. I awaken the spirits of the dead. I prey inside your head. All ends of the earth cannot stop me. For once the hour is struck, light is swept away, while darkness roams the earth. I fear only the cock's crow. For it calls my sworn enemy. As the first glimpse of dawn lays, I hide from the light's fatal rays.

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[n/a] <~> 20-Aug-02/12:47 PM Reply
i fear neither crow nor cock nor getting laid by the light of dawn's fatal rays.
[0] poetandknowit 20-Aug-02/2:04 PM Reply
Does darkness really echo? Shirvering fear, chilling words in ear. How can it be fatal. It s always dark somewhere. Should be a poem about moving on. But this just sucks.
[1] <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Aug-02/4:50 PM Reply
lololololololololol! you are so scary and dark, you steal my poodles bark..you are so huge and black..you shrivel Jesu's ball sac...indeed you're the spine of the night, you assholed my mighty mag light...oh jesu oh jesu, please rectumfy my fears! lol! what shall we do...fleeeeeeee!