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Satisfaction (Free verse) by Ojiboch

At the top once again and I think this time I'll spend some quality time where I'm at But I've been here before and I've found it a bore (there's nothing new to explore) I'm fooling myself everytime, but I just can't resist to always purposely miss and fuck myself over once more But that's OK

Katie 13-Sep-02/8:33 AM
over all it pretty good, try to add more detail =)




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