Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.116	16-Jan-07/11:54 AM
How beat-y. 1/10
Re: good bye. by nentwined	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.116	16-Jan-07/11:53 AM
Your spelling and poetic ability are on a par with shuushit's. This is more of a weeping sore than a pimple.
Re: If she thinks if she believes by Prince of Void	Dovina 75.82.85.162	16-Jan-07/11:29 AM
I think you mean "then" in Line 3, not "so". Even so, it's unnecessarily tied up in "if"'s.
Re: I heart you by thetrev	Dovina 75.82.85.162	16-Jan-07/11:26 AM
Would be better withoiut the "There"'s. i.e., "Magnetic words on the fridge"
Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined	some deleted user 195.194.75.209	16-Jan-07/10:59 AM
This made me puke
Re: bipolar by nentwined	some deleted user 195.194.75.209	16-Jan-07/10:53 AM
Illiterate shit
Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.224.198	16-Jan-07/4:52 AM
Suspiciously familiar. A richly deserved zero.
Re: My daughter found at the age of 28 by Jill Stockinger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.224.198	16-Jan-07/4:50 AM
I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.224.198	16-Jan-07/4:49 AM
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
Re: Dr Toilet's Tidal Poem by Dr Toilet	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.224.198	16-Jan-07/4:46 AM
Ah yes indeedy, I recognise the odour so well; it is particularly strong as it arises from the previous commentator's poetry.
Re: Push, Wipe, Flush by Dr Toilet	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.224.198	16-Jan-07/4:45 AM
It is not often one comes across such a beautiful piece of versification as this one. Thank fuck.
Re: a comment on Spinning, reeling by ecargo	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Jan-07/2:18 AM
Are you Mrs Rockmage? do you have a beard too?
Re: Spinning, reeling by ecargo	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:32 PM
It's hard to make decent poetry from heart felt anger over war and politics- not a bad effort-
Re: Sky All Around Me (goddess edit) by ecargo	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:27 PM
Full of light and grace and airiness- lovely to read!
Re: Window Washer (midtown) by ecargo	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:26 PM
very lyrical
Re: fox and hounds by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:07 PM
doesn't make it for me- some nice images, but did not jell-
Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:05 PM
parts too unclear, i liked the last 3 lines- with paper of my face- don't use a metaphor if you won't develop it or DId you mean Off my face, as Dovina asked--
Re: a love not meant to be by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:02 PM
has some charm
Re: word splatter by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/8:00 PM
feels very real.
Re: on my hog by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:59 PM
I got it. Not great stuff, though.