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word splatter (Free verse) by nentwined I look deep in your eyes
and a welling of
bile
springs forth
all over your pretty spring dress.
I'm so sorry.
Want to take a shower and fuck?
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Posted: June 17, 2005 3:20 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2005 3:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.7777777 Overall Rank: 1734 Comments:
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17-Jun-05/3:48 PM
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There was this news item about a student barfing over his teacher. Just exam nerves; the explanation he tossed around
What did she see that brought forth a welling of bile?
Or is the bile figurative for what you saw? In either case - yuck - why the last line?
I think because she is covered in puke.
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Hmmmmm, i recal this poem in the Poetry Corner forum on www.braingell.com, why bother with the shower? Just hold your breath
So many nights just like the one described make me resonate with this poem. Now I have to shower with my flat screen monitor. A bit of William Carlos Williams or Carlos William Carlos in this one.
feels very real.
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