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word splatter (Free verse) by nentwined

I look deep in your eyes and a welling of bile springs forth all over your pretty spring dress. I'm so sorry. Want to take a shower and fuck?

Dovina 17-Jun-05/4:36 PM
What did she see that brought forth a welling of bile?
Or is the bile figurative for what you saw?
In either case - yuck - why the last line?




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